[daisy] [docs] Multi-language support Guided Tour: typo & french translation improvement suggestion

[Olivier Lange]

Hello,

While reading the Multilanguage support Guided Tour of Daisy 2.2:

  Daisy 2.2 > Multi-language support > Guided tour
  http://cocoondev.org/daisydocs-2_2/537-cd/557-cd.html

... I noticed the 'Edit document sample' was translated to french, nice. It's very charming! but sounds somewhat unnatural (absolutely no harm intended :-) If you'd like the translation to sound more naturally, then within the following sample picture:

  Image 'tm-edit-fr'
  http://cocoondev.org/daisydocs-2_2/556-cd

I would replace the HTML Area content with the following:

  « Bienvenue!

  Bonjour! Pour tout apprendre au sujet des biscuits, vous avez déniché le bon coin.

  J'ajouterai du contenu sous peu, revenez ultérieurement! »

And within the first sample picture in english, I believe there is a typo:

  Image 'tm-edit-en'
  http://cocoondev.org/daisydocs-2_2/553-cd

  Should'nt one read « come back later » rather than « come bak later » ? (my english isn't that natural to tell)

Do you want me to provide updated pictures? If so, can I update them directly in Daisy within the online document? should I attach them in JIRA? (BTW: is there a "documentation" component within JIRA?)

Last but not least: the translation management features look great! I look forward using them.

Kind regards,

Olivier

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